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Binging whilst Recovering…

For the past couple of weeks I’ve been recovering from a ‘minor’ surgery. Aside from the cataract that I had fixed last year I haven’t had any out of the ordinary medical procedures since I was a small child – so for me, this minor surgery was something of a major. Requiring one week of bed rest with the help of prescribed narcotics, and one week of working from home with a lot of super strength advil. I start back at work tomorrow. I’ve had only a couple of outings this weekend, couple of short walks with the dogs and a dinner with friends that wiped me out. HOPEFULLY I’ll be ready for tomorrow – but if not I’ll continue to work and nap from home. BUT that is not the point of this blog. The point is the love of the binge.

Really in the past week plus I’ve been able to binge on lots of indulgences books, movies, tv, chocolate (who’s going to say no to a patient!) whilst lying around my house. Part of my recovery was lying pretty flat/straight, so sitting up and actually going anywhere wasn’t part of the prescribed recovery. Therefore, I took advantage and did some catching up and here is how I spent the time:

Sports. How could I avoid them. Wimbledon (my first true sports love thanks to Dad) always fun to watch. Well done Novak and Petra hard fought and deserved. On to the US Open. And the World Cup. While admittedly – I am not really a soccer fan (120 minutes and NOT ONE SCORE?! seriously) – but it was hard not to get caught up in the USA hype. Exciting to watch those supreme athletes. Go… um? Netherlands?

Witches. Yup, you heard me. I think I must have watched something that prompted me to binge watch the new’ish series Witches of East End. I watched a couple of episodes when it originally aired and thought….meh, sort of silly, bed hopping drivel with not enough magic. Well, perhaps it was the narcotic buzz I was under, but I actually enjoyed the final eight episodes and am looking forward to the start of the second season tonight. From there I hopped over to Once Upon a Time. I stopped watching mid-season, for no reason other than I ran out of time in my schedule and P doesn’t watch (though he should, we’re both Disney-philes, why WOULDN’T he love this show!). Anywhoo – poor Regina. She is one of my favs in that show, and I actually like her evil and nice, but that witch can’t catch a break. And who isn’t excited to see Elsa, Anna and Kristoff join the show this fall?! Weeeee! AND… it didn’t stop there. While I’m stoked about the final book in the All Soul’s Trilogy coming out on the 15th (Deborah Harkness – check them out…), I wanted a little witchery in some reading as well and came across a unique series from a newly published writer named J.D. Horn called the Witching Savannah series (The Line, The Source and coming in 2015 The Void are the three in the series). I read through The Line and The Source in a matter of days and L O V E D them. Fresh material and voices, in a rich setting that he wrote so well. The secondary characters often outshone the primary, but the voices and tension and mystery of this family of witches was entertainingly written. I actually sent the author a thank you note and he responded within minutes. Lovely. Can’t wait for The Void. Trying to decide what to read next before my Book of Life (Deborah Harkness) is delivered to my kindle – choices are: the Golem and the Jinni by Helene Wicker (another new novelist)(picked up for $2.99 through amazon, have been wanting to read this mystical tale for a year now), the first in the Dresden Files series (a friend loves these), or The Outlander by Diana Gabaldon (I’ve pushed this one away more than once despite all the high reccos because I think it’s going to be too romantic for me…blech). I think I’ll land on the Golem and the Jinni and see where that takes me.

I finished up a couple of other books before my inner eye turned me to Witches. The first was the last in the Shatter Me YA series Ignite Me by Tahereh Mafi – cool super hero Xmen stuff, though fell down a few times as the story progressed. The third was definitely my favorite of the three, even if it wrapped up quickly. The other was a recco from my mom, Winter Ghosts by Kate Mosse (not the model) – and while it was a well written yarn, it was not the scary ghost story it made itself out to be. pretty predictable.

We also started up a couple of new mid apocalyptic shows Last Ship (TNT) and The LeftOvers (HBO). I am liking the Last Ship better than The LeftOvers – but a lot of that is due to the fact that the Last Ship I can get my head around and the LOs just started with a ton o questions left unanswered. I can’t imagine either show will make a second season, just due to the subject matter – mid apocalyptic is tough. Looking forward to Guillermo Del Toro’s The Strain later this month too to round out my mid-apocalyptic month!

Movies… of course, how could I forget those. Nothing I haven’t seen already – and mostly by way of what was available on one of the movie channels so I didn’t have to put in a dvd, but did watch some comfort food of movies; Jurassic Park (spared no expense), Oblivion (I really liked this Tom Cruise flick), World War Z, Indiana Jones, all 6 Star Wars. The only new movie we watched was called We’re the Millers and it was two star at best (my favorite part was during the outros and the whole group singing the Friends theme to Jen Aniston).

Special thanks to my lovely husband P, mom, dad, sis and her hubby as well as my lovely goldens who kept my spirits up and took care of me while I was down! xoxo


Remakes that are Remade

A few nights ago in class we talked about the ‘seven basic plots’ briefly and how to make a general theme your own with great characters and environment. That got me thinking about just how many things today are new versions of classics. For instance – three of the last five movies I’ve seen are remakes; Godzilla (fun spin on the classic, complete with Japanese Godzilla scream and other beasties!), Batman Dark Knight Rises (I know I know… what took us so long!), The Amazing Spiderman 2 (I loved Spidey and Gwen, but the villans were meh). Have to say though the remakes were better than the ‘originals’ (both from books). I also sat through the painfully long Wolf of Wallstreet (depressing and nekkid with loads of drugs) and the painfully bad Vampire Academy (I read the book and only rented the SD version, sooo cheaper than a latte) – In VA the song during the credits was the best part, yet another remake of the Bauhaus vamp classic tune Bela Lugosi’s Dead this time by CHVRCHES. And I keep hovering over the ‘rent’ button on the Great Gatsby, but haven’t pulled the trigger yet…

This trend is happening on my TV as well. I’ve seen the new Rosemary’s Baby plugged several times over the last few weeks (weird wig Zoe). How many NCIS or CSI shows are there now – NY, Miami, LA, St. Louis (kidding about that last one I think, I’ve never seen a CSI show) – while those aren’t remakes, they certainly are capitalizing on a ‘good idea’ while the iron is hot. I love love love the new take on Sherlock Holmes called Elementary, and I’ve heard the BBC Sherlock is tremendous as well (need to invest some time there). Beverly Hills 90210 had a rebirth on the CW (of course), I see Dallas adverts on TNT, I L O V E D the Battlestar Galactica remake a few years back, The terminator on Fox looked good (though I never had a chance to watch), I’ve heard a buzz that Charmed is being remade as well (much to the witch sister’s chagrin). My mom and dad keep telling me to watch the new FX show Fargo based on the hilarious movie a decade or so ago. There are even rumors that they’re going to remake or create a new installment in the Star Trek TV franchise (we’ll see if that’s true in July at the LV Con – yes, you heard me…).

Remakes happen in tunes all the time, often you’ll hear the remake in a movie soundtrack. The Bauhaus song was v. appropriate for the Vampire movie. Not sure what goes on behind closed doors to allow remakes, but I’m sure some sort of permissions/dollars pass hands from the original artist to the next. Some of my favs… Lorde’s version of Tears for Fears Everybody Wants to Rule the World (Hunger Games Catching Fire soundtrack), Johnny Cash’s version of NIN’s Hurt, Gary Jules’s Tears for Fears Mad World (Donnie Darko soundtrack) (still following?), Everything on this album… Anywhooo – plenty of remakes, I’m only covering a scant few.

That brings me back to novels and the seven plot theory. You don’t see a lot of ‘remakes’ of books, I’m guessing because that would be plagiarism of sorts? You do see writers reworking classics occasionally, once those classics are in the public domain. For instance, I am reading a YA series right now based on fairy tales (Marissa Meyers Lunar Chronicles – great spin on Cinderella, Red Riding Hood, and currently reading the spin on Rapunzel). You do see themes repeating over and over and some how people, gifted authors, make those themes their own unique stories for readers like myself to enjoy. And lucky us that they do.

Life is a series… of series

Having just returned from a quick trip across the Atlantic I had an opportunity to read a couple of books (and load a few as backups). I noticed upon completing these and observing those I’ve loaded that I have a serious series fetish. I personally like coming in when the series is complete so I can binge read, but sometimes that is just not possible. It feels rare these days that you get a book that is one and done – especially in the YA category (although refreshingly, the latest Expiration Day was… I think). EVERYTHING seems to be part of a series. As a wannabe author I’ve read that you should pitch your book (singular) even if you have a series in mind so that you don’t scare away the publishers/agents – but I’ve also read the opposite, if you have a good idea for a series (and can pull it off) put in your query letter that it is a series. I have so many downloaded samples of series starters… I just wish I knew before investing if I was going to be in for a good ride, or if I should stop before I begin.

Anyway – today I wanted to put a lens on these series that I’ve invested in…

Completed series (that I can remember – thank you goodreads):
1) Harry Potter by JK Rowling (beloved beloved beloved)
2) Lord of the Rings by JRR Tolkien (though admittedly, watched the movies, THEN listened to the BBC book on tape – that series is L O N G)
3) Twilight by Stephenie Meyer (of course… what YA writer hasn’t read these as inspiration?)
4) Divergent by Veronica Roth (though the last one lost steam)
5) Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins (again… what happens with these last books?)
6) Sookie Stackhouse Vampire Series by Charlaine Harris (yes I started before True Blood, and she definitely petered out – but watching that HBO series divergence you can see why)
7) His Dark Materials (aka Golden Compass series) by Philip Pullman (definitely started better than it finished, but I do have a dog named Lyra so does deserve a place on this completed list)
8) Chronicles of Narnia by CS Lewis (at least I think I finished these… 6th grade stuff!)
9) Wool Series by Hugh Howey (so good! recommend for anyone who likes dystopian)
10) Robert Langdon series by Dan Brown (is this one finished? Don’t know, cruised through Inferno this summer)
11) Jurassic Park by Michael Crichton (dino-saurs… what’s not to like?)
12) Dragon Tattoo series by Stieg Larson (gripping, good, cruised through all three in short order)
13) 50 shades by EL James (yep. I read them all. Paperback and all, not even hiding behind my kindle. Silly lightweight porn. Could have probably made one good book instead of three mediocre books)
14) Confessions of a Shopaholic Sophie Kinsella (writes a fun/funny main character who is terrible hopeless but makes you feel better about your own plight)

Abandoned series:
1) Anita Blake Vampire Hunter by Laurell Hamilton (the first few were so good – then they just got lazy and pornographic)
2) Meredith Gentry Fairy Series by Laurel Hamilton (same author and same problem as Anita Blake)
3) Odd Thomas by Dean Koontz (liked the first book, did NOT like how it ended, trudged through the second book and didn’t continue)
4) Fire and Ice Series by George RR Martin (aka Game of Thrones – made it half way through book three and didn’t want to meet yet another unimportant character or have to refer to the family glossary in the back to see who was killing whom in which family. TOO Much. Thank you HBO for simplifying – though that Red Wedding was a SHOCKER!)
5) The Boyfriend List series by E. Lockhart (read the first one after meeting the author, didn’t love it enough to want to read more)
6) Uglies series by Scott Westerfeld (read through the first 2 in this series before giving up)
7) The Strain Trilogy by Guillermo del Toro (who doesn’t like a vampire trilogy? me apparently. This started off so well, but then spiraled into mundane, maybe I’ll watch the FX series…)
8) Cormoran Strike series by JK Rowling (definitely not Harry Potter and I apparently don’t like male protagonist detective novels…)
9) The 5th Wave series by Rick Yancey (not even sure another one is coming out – but not a fan, didn’t like the characters)
10) Alex Cross by James Patterson (I did like these, but I think I just stopped grabbing the latest one while at the airport…)
11) Kay Scarpetta series by Particia Cornwell (didn’t mind these either… just stopped reading. Watch Bones now if I need a fix)
12) The Black Jewels by Anne Bishop (I think I read the main three from this dark fantasy series – not bad, but when the main protagonists story completed I wasn’t interested in the side character stories)
13) Caster Chronicles by Kami Garcia (aka at Beautiful Creatures – apparently this is a good series but honestly I didn’t like either of the main characters and the movie was even worse. Couldn’t do it, as much as I like books about witches…)
14) The Inheritance Cycle (aka Eragon series) by Christopher Paolini (impressive first book for a 16yo writer. Actually own the second two in hardback from the series, but haven’t felt the need to pick up a 1000 page hard back…)

Still going strong:
1) Miss Peregrine’s Peculiar Children by Ransom Riggs (just finished the first one of these on the plane – impressive!)
2) Maze Runner series by James Dashner (about to start book 3 of 3 – but haven’t invested in the .5 versions)
3) Mortal Instruments by Cassandra Clare (gave up on this series after reading the first book, but then picked it up again after watching the cheezy but fun movie, on book 3 of 5 so far)
4) Vampire Academy Series by Richelle Mead (the first one was mildly amusing, strong protagonist, would’ve abandoned, but my friend let me borrow the next couple, so am currently about to read number 3)
5) The Lunar Chronicles by Marissa Meyer- another Seattle author, like Richelle (these are clever futuristic takes on fairy tales. About to start 3 in at least a series of 4)
6) Stephanie Plum Bounty Hunter series by Janet Evanovich (these are fun to just pick up and read whenever – no need to rush out and binge I’m on 15 of a still going 21 so far!)
7) MaddAddam/Oryx and Crake series by Margaret Atwood (clever adult dystopian. Didn’t love the protagonist, but the second in the series was highly recommended so will go back)
8) The Bone Season by Samantha Shannon (not quite the ‘next JK Rowling’ as the previews stated, but good enough to preorder the next one)
9) Old Man’s War series by John Scalzi (only have read one of several in this series, but it was funny so I’ll go back some day. Have the second one loaded on ye ole Kindle)
10) Thursday Next series by Jasper Fforde (so cleverly written I have to take long breaks inbetween…)
11) The Passage series by Justin Cronin (love this dystopian series…wish I would have found it AFTER he completed it, waiting is painful)
12) All Souls Trilogy by Deborah Harkness (same as The Passage series – waiting for the third book is painful… want it now)

2014 Reading Challenge

2014 Reading Challenge
Kathy has
read 24 books toward her goal of 52 books.

Writing Rituals & More Reading

Hello Happy Readers (aka Mom and P),

It’s time for an update.  I stayed up too late last night finishing a book and didn’t have the energy to get up and head to the gym at 5:20.  Therefore, I’m writing a blog entry (and if I finish in time I’ll start on a bit of a novel overhaul).

We are two weeks into our third quarter at the University of Washington’s Popular Fiction 1 course.  During this quarter we are discussing the finer points of getting published with our novels and writing the ‘end’.   In our first few classes we’ve learned about how to and are writing a Query Letter for our books, as well as perfecting our elevator pitches.  Mine is still a little weak (e.g. P and I were chatting a week ago and I was telling him about class and he asked me what my elevator pitch was and I had to look up what I wrote in class…).  The fact that I’m struggling so much to get my story into a couple of sentences and a page (for the synopsis) makes me think I need to give the draft another edit and perhaps pull out the parallel story and just focus on my one protagonist for this go.  But need to noodle on that.

The other thing we have talked about in class are writing rituals and how folks who are serious about being professional authors all have them.  This writing ritual is something you do that helps you get into a regular writing groove; go to a coffee shop around the same time each day and order a drink and sit and start writing, wake up at 4am and writer for two hours before work, walk around greenlake to get your thoughts together then write for a couple of hours.  I personally do not have a ritual yet.  I am a morning person – and should set up my writing ritual in the AM before work.  I have to work out a few challenges 1) I like to go to the gym (I NEED TO GO TO THE GYM) M/W/F at 5:30.  2) T/Th present day I’ve been getting up and playing video games… which while part of my job, I could forgo to write if I really WANTED to… I am feeling inspired though, and our latest game (Elder Scrolls) has been a little lame so perhaps now is the time to start a new writing ritual.

The reading challenge is still ON like Donkey Kong!  I’m actually a couple of books ahead right now in part due to a nice plane ride down the west coast and a short little book of poems written by a dog… 🙂  I’ve read eight books since my last post on March 2nd, even some from the list I said I was going to read next!  ha!  Here are some quick notes in the order that I personally liked them:

1) A Dog’s Purpose by W. Bruce Cameron I agree with another reviewer- this W. Bruce probably is a dog.  The book, written from a dog’s POV, is one of the best I’ve read this year.  Touching, funny, and an interesting exercise in point of view.  AND since my two loyal blog readers are reading now I won’t give away any spoilers – but it’s good.  GET reading!

2) Carrie by Stephen King – yup, Stephen King.  That’s right folks.  My second Stephen King book, though not sure we should count his autobio/writing book, as it was all non-fiction.  I really liked Carrie.  I’ve never had the urge to read Stephen King.  His stories and movies always seem so overwrought.  But after reading the story of how Carrie came to be (his wife pulled a draft out of the garbage and loved the flawed, SERIOUSLY flawed main protagonist, encouraged Stephen to finish it and turn it into his publisher – and it became his first published book).  It was pretty fantastic.  All over the place from a POV and setting perspective as it jumps from Carrie’s story, to a bystanders story, to telekinesis researchers articles, to newspaper clippings and interviews of ‘the incident’.  Short book – must read if you’ve never read a Stephen King book.  I may actually read another of his… 🙂

3) Scarlet (the Lunar Chronicles) by Marissa Meyer.  First, Marissa is my hero. I know I’ve written a review about her already.  She’s in her 20’s, wrote both Cinder (her first published book) and Scarlet during NaNoWriMo and lives just south of me in Tacoma Washington (plus she wrote me back when I sent her a note through her blog.  :))  I love that she’s taken fairy tales  (Cinder is about a young borg servant who works for a mean lady and her two step daughters, and it culminates at the prince’s ball… and Scarlet is about a young French woman with lovely red hair who meets up with a gruff young man who’s in a gang called a wolf pack while investigating her grand-mere’s disappearance) and turned them on their head in her Lunar Chronicles series.  I also love that her protagonists are kick ass young women.  I’ve already downloaded Cress which is the third in the series.

4). I Could Chew On This: and Other Poems by Dogs by Francesco Marciuliano.  This is a sweet little book of poems written by dogs.  Super fun to read these out loud to friends and family members who also appreciate a good poem by a dog.

5). The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time by Mark Haddon.  This is an acclaimed story written from the POV of an autistic teenager.  V. interesting but a little frustrating to read.  This was recommended during class by the same person who recommended The Fault in Our Stars.  I didn’t like it nearly as much as the Fault – but it was still a well written story.  Not much about the dead dog – I don’t want you readers to think all I read are books about dogs… not true! 🙂

6). ttyl (Internet Girls #1) by Lauren Myracle.  I picked up this book after the AWP conference.  An excellent exercise in point of view, this YA book is written entirely with text messages between three best friends.  The author actually gets away with using pink font in this best seller to differentiate one of the texters.  I liked a couple of things in this book 1) that it is completely in text and therefore there is practically NO setting in this book at all (I struggle with setting!) and 2) that you can actually see the story progress through a normal story path, even while written entirely in text messages.  Brilliant.  I didn’t like it enough to read the next one in the series though.

7). The Boyfriend List:  15 Guys, 11 Shrink Appointments, 4 Ceramic Frogs and Me, Ruby Oliver (#1) by E. Lockhart.  This was another AWP find.  I went to a panel with the author on it.  This one I didn’t really enjoy, mainly because the protagonist was so annoying.

8).  Yoga Bitch: One Woman’s Quest to Conquer Skepticism, Cynicism, and Cigarettes on the Path to Enlightenment by Suzanne Morrison.  Another AWP find.  Went to a reading of this and a few other humorous memoirs.  Loved the writer and her reading of the memoir, but upon reading the book myself found that I wasn’t a big fan of memoirs or yoga and was a little bored.

2014 Reading Challenge

2014 Reading Challenge
Kathy has
read 17 books toward her goal of 52 books.

AWP Notes

The AWP was in Seattle this weekend.  AWP stands for Association of Writer’s and Writing Programs.

I was unaware of this conference until about two weeks ago when a bowling buddy of mine (and published poet) asked me if I was going – and that if not I absolutely should as this was a ‘biggie’ as far as writing conferences was concerned and traveled around the US each year.  I mentioned it to my classmates and someone discovered we received a significant discount as a student, so we signed up.

The conference ran Thursday through Saturday, and they said over 14k attendees showed up.  This was my first non-nerd conference as an attendee – and at first it was odd to see so many professionals w/o Batman or Pokémon costumes on – but quickly I got into the grove and attended 3 days worth of panel talks inbetween conference calls and other work meetings (lots of driving Thursday and Friday!).

In addition to downloading about 50 samples of books from the different speakers (and dropping some coin in the YA section of Barnes and Nobel on the way out each day) here are the tips I picked up:

Thursday Recap:

Topic: It’s Funny Because It’s True

All three wrote memoirs (non-fiction), though embellished for laughs.  All three read from their memoirs to start the morning.  I downloaded samples of the first two.  The second one sounded good – but was about mommyhood and that is not my cup o tea.

Tips on writing humor (fiction or non-fiction)

  1. Humor should ‘sneak’ up on      the reader.  If they see the      joke/comedy coming it won’t be as funny/impactful
  2. Rule of three – in some cases      repeating the funny thing in different ways becomes funnier as it becomes      less obtuse
  3. When you are writing      something you think is hilarious be sure to take a step back and look at      it from 30k feet to make sure other people will think it is as funny as      you do (esp. in non-fiction, because you are writing from memory)
  4. Sometimes people use humor to      avoid writing about other things – dig deep and find out what it is you      really want to write about.  Be      honest with yourself and you’ll find your writing is better.
  5. With memoir humor when you      look critically at yourself (self deprecating) it is easier to make fun of      others
  6. Difference between Wit and      Comedy?  With a ‘witty voice’ you      don’t need comedic scenes.  True      comedic scenes are hard.

Topic: Commercial Literary Fiction (Not an Oxymoron): The Place of Craft in Writing and Teaching Children’s and Young Adult Literature


Impressive group of ladies – with over 100 titles published among them.  I downloaded samples from Micol and Nova.  They were all quite complimentary of each other as well.  They all recommended Sara Zarr’s podcast, and were impressed with Nova’s invitations to writing fellowships (where apparently you get to hole up on someone’s dime and write for an extended period.  COOL!)

They also recommended several other kid-lit authors/books that I might mention throughout that I’ve either downloaded samples or bought (thank you Kindle for immediate gratification!).

Book/Author recco Robert Cormier’s Chocolate War (heard this recco in two other panels so it’s now been downloaded to my Kindle.)

Difference between YA and Middle Grade? YA teens like looking in the mirror and understanding themselves, MG like looking out the window and discovering the world.   In BOTH cases the POV is close up whether that be in first person or a very close third person.

Everyone should have a one sentence pitch for their idea/book.  Micol started as an editor/publisher so hammered this point home and I think she’s right.  It’s your books elevator pitch.  Come on people.  I know it’s your baby, but getting it down to one sentence is a must.  They suggested “XX meets XX”  – for instance “Indiana Jones meets The Hitchhiker’s Guide” or something of the like with popular notions that anyone could grasp quickly.

Most of them (outside of Micol) started by writing what they wanted to write, not thinking about what audiences wanted to read.  They quickly found though by commercializing a bit (adding a ‘big moment’ – Sara suggested a dead body or a bag of cash as examples) your novel can quickly become more exciting/commercially relevant.

For Commercial YA think about starting you book with something happening, not pages of dialog or setting.  YA Commercial doesn’t mean EASY either.

There are no topics off limits anymore (see Friday morning’s panel for more on this – yow).  YA is more about the immediacy of the main character and their age than subject matter (hence why The Book Thief is a YA book, even though it’s about Nazi’s and horrible things during the holocaust).

Recommended exercises from Stephanie who teaches at the Hugo House in Seattle:

1) Write four paragraphs about your main character’s hands and what they are doing at that moment.  Get into the immediacy of the character.
2) An exercise to help you understand your character is to write down what in their ‘life’ changes them the most.  It may not end up in the book but it will help you understand your character better.

Nova recommended that you know while writing your first two paragraphs of your book you know what the ending is and incorporate some clues/hooks in the first page that you’ll come back to in the end.  These may be so subtle in the beginning that only you as the author see them, but they will help you stay on track.

Then I had to go back to Redmond for meetings and a 1 hour publisher meeting turned into 3 so I skipped the rest of the panels I wanted to see.  Hopefully my writing buddies took some notes.

Friday Recap:

Topic: Warning Extreme Content: Sex, Drugs, and Abuse as Themes in YA Lit
Ann Angel
Kekla Magoon
Carrie Jones

This was quite the way to wake up.  Yesterday comedy, today brutal topics like abuse, racism, bullying, suicide, sex and yes – the Black Panthers.

There are two types of abuse individual/personal and social/cultural (the way people are treated by society in general).  Investigating these topics in writing can be painful and hard – but they are happening to kids today and if you can connect with one kid that is having a similar issue it makes it worth it to these authors who take risks.

In YA and Middle Grade you run into gate keepers; parents, teachers, librarians, media that will try to stop you from telling your story.  Once a ‘Extreme Content’ label is slapped on a book it draws both good and bad attention.

Carrie Jones presented the sex portion of the talk and she was hilariously nervous.  (need to check out her Need series – she seemed fun).  Fun facts about SEX – in 2001 (!!) 47% of teens self reported having sex (to the CDC).  Kids find a way to get books with racy content (think back to when we were little Wifey… anyone? Flowers in the Attic?).

Sex, drinking, and drugs are all things that teens deal with whether they read about them or not.  But remember that if it is a plot element that it STILL needs to move the story along.  Don’t just have sex for sex’s sake.  😉  (as someone in video game marketing I say AMEN to this.  Call of Duty doesn’t make killers or deranged teenagers).

They recommended checking out the website for even more info.

Lots of book reccos in this one.  Here are a few that I’m considering checking out:
Speak by Laurie Halse Anderson
Cut by Patricia McCormick
Scars by Cheryl Rainfield
Shine by Lauren Myracle (and for something lighter, but still banned: ttyl – done completely in text messages (one I bought at B&N) and yet another – they really liked this Lauren gal  The Infinite Moment of Us.

Topic: Magic and Intellect


So far, my panels have been excellent.  Funny, great engaging speakers, and they’ve given me at least a couple of nuggets to take away and think about.  There were two panels that I wanted to attend during this time slot.  Let’s just say on this one I chose poorly (I say this whilst thinking of the poor chap in the third Indiana Jones movie who drank from the wrong chalice and promptly aged himself to dust).  I wished I would have gone to the one that had Vampires, Aliens and Fae in the title… sigh.  But alas, here is a quick recap.  First from the program since I clearly didn’t read this very well:

In her essay “The Deep Zoo” Rikki Ducornet writes: “the work of the writer is to move beyond the simple definitions or descriptions of things… and to bring a dream to life through the alchemy of language; to move from the street—the place of received ideas—into the forest—the place of the unknown.”  On this panel five fiction writers intend to describe, depict, illustrate, and otherwise expose this movement from known to unknown in order to ask: what do we mean when we say “magic”?

Okay – interesting right?  Well.  Each person took a turn at the podium and unfortunately it started off poorly and never recovered.  Let me say that they could have had double the size room for this panel. It was PACKED to the gills.  Lots of people are interested in magic apparently.  There were people standing 3-4 deep against the walls, all of the floor space was covered and nary a seat was empty.  I had two ladies sit on either side of me in the front row and have a conversation on top of me.  That was weird, but they settled down once the discussion started.

The first person got up to speak and had a stack of papers she was reading from.  To this point in my AWP experience I’ve had folks engaging either by reading their own (comedic) books, free speaking in a panel, or presenting a couple of slides with book images on them.  This was the first person who had typed pages to read from.  And read from them she did.  In a monotonous voice.  Poor thing.  I couldn’t tell if what she was reading was her presentation or someone’s work or some personal thoughts – VERY confused (and I didn’t hear anything about magic, though I was probably expecting Harry Potter fireworks so my bad there), and then it got better/worse as she said, now I’m going to read from a new novel that I’m putting out… DEAR GOD  for the next fifteen minutes she talked about different ways to kill babies.  Some were the dead baby jokes of a few years ago (Thanks Chenelle for educating me there, I just thought she was twisted).  After about 15 minutes with no sign of letting up some dude standing the back of the room yells out “WHAT DOES THIS HAVE TO DO WITH MAGIC AND INTELLECT?”  after a shocked pregnant pause from the reader he continued with something about how this was the third panel he’d been to that was misrepresented (he wasn’t reading the descriptions very well either) and she was going on FAR too long about dead babies.  A few others murmured their agreement and then some audience members started sticking up for the author talking about how she was evoking emotion from him and the passage was doing it’s job… and then he countered with I’ve waiting 20 years to see Rikki speak and I would just like to see this moving along (fair enough..).  Then the other panelists came to her defense, including Rikki and she continued.  He and several others left the room (though it was still over fire code limit I’m sure in capacity).  She finished her reading a few moments later and then sat at her spot and cried for 15 minutes.  AWKWARD.  Honestly – I’m not sure what any of the other presenters said because by then the room had become a psychology experiment and I was watching the audience to see their reactions/movements.

I do remember another speaker; Anna I think talking about birds as symbols for a really long uncomfortable time.

The ONE thing that I took away from the talk (aside from shock and awe that there are hecklers at book conferences) was that when you are writing about magic think about two symbols; Symbol 1 – your symbol to represent Magic in your mind.  Symbol 2 – your symbol to represent intellect.  Always be thinking about those and referencing them when writing to keep your writing clean/clear.   Or something.  honestly, WTF.  time for another panel.

Topic: Authors & Editor: The Relationship that Builds a Book


This was a refreshingly normal panel in a GIANT (Star Trek Convention Las Vegas Style) ballroom.  The moderator posed questions for the authors and the editor and they answered honestly and in Chuck’s case pretty humorously (need to watch Fight Club again, his books are too dark for me but Brad Pitt…).  Some of the questions:

1) How do you develop a level of trust with your editor 9or workshop group) when sending him work?  Answers:  recognize their authority and skill.  Articulate what works and what doesn’t up front so everyone’s level set properly. Surround yourself with clever people, who have a memory of your past work to draw from.

Don’t use your editor/agent as a therapist – be a professional they aren’t there to FIX your work (or your problems) – present them with finished work and see where it goes from there.

2) Do you ever get to a point where you don’t think you need an editor?  Answer: resounding NO from each.

3) How do you use your workshop process to improve?  Answer (Chuck/Monica) they meet WEEKLY (still!) in Portland.  It is exciting and fun with not competitive with each other.  The push each other to be better.  It is a good natural competition (unlike an MFA workshop where everyone is competing for attention).

4) What happens if you have a BAD writer in your workshop/group? Answer (Chuck/Monica) lie and tell them the group is disbanding… No – if you have a good ratio of great writers and bad writers then you can actually learn something from the bad AND possibly help them get better.  Answer from Jess – his one workshop only he and another person were really serious about it, most wouldn’t read the pages before group or would fake it and come in w/ lame feedback like “I didn’t understand it…”.  He kept the one serious person as a ‘beta reader’ and ditched the rest.

Topic: What I wish I knew before starting Writing for YA and Middle Grade


This was one of the most informative panels from a YA perspective.  The writers on the panel were v. knowledgeable about the industry and genre.   They all were from Minnesota and knew each other as well which lead to some fun banter.  Some notes:

* Open the door immediately to the story.  Can’t have four pages of setting/description like an adult novel.  The narrator should be in your face/close up.  Not an adult looking back on a story of a kid or removed 3rd person POV.

* Start with something happening!  ACTION.  DIALOG. EXCITEMENT.  Get to the story quickly.

* Think about the economy of words – shrink a chapter down to a page, a page down to a paragraph, and a paragraph down to a sentence for younger audiences.

*Writerly writing is NOT impressive to these audiences.

*Read lots of different kid lit.  Understand your audience, the toys they’re using, the dialog they’re using, their physical experiences of being a teenager.  LOTS of HORMONES – not just kissing scenes – but always raging with emotion.  Keep up – these teen experiences are changing all the time (e.g. Facebook is NO longer for kids… only adults use it.  Find out what they’re using to be authentic if you’re story is modern).  Be around kids (even if you don’t have them – go to malls, movies, schools to see how they interact).

* Immerse yourself in what you want to write.  Don’t be afraid to write.

* When you’re done with your book (or have a favorite YA/MG book) underline the sad parts in blue (crayon) and the happy/funny parts in red (crayon) in the end your page should be purple for balance.  You want a balance on every page.

* Develop your ‘teen voice’ – they will notice if you sound forced.  Watch TV, Movies, and read books that are teen focused (and good) to get a good sense.

*Your audience is teenaged (and sometimes/more times now older) – but you have several gatekeepers who are also reading/commenting on your books: Parents, Editors, Librarians, Teachers,  – all with thoughts on what is appropriate.

*YA is VERY fast paced – not a lot of pauses to look around.

* The community likes to participate in your writing – so be a STRONG social media person (example John Green).

*Join SCBWI, go to workshops, conferences, check out their blue boards and forums.

Book reccos:

Topic:  The Middle Matters:  How Fiction Writers Approach the Middle of their Stories


Again I must start with the description from the AWP site:   With so much attention to the beginning and ending of stories, this panel will focus on the neglected middle.  By examining a variety of works of fiction by acclaimed writers, we will explore interesting and innovative choices writers have made in the middle of their work.  What can a writer accomplish in the middle?  What formal choices have writers made in the middle?  Hinges, turns, crucial scenes, character growth, and other means of developing a work of fiction will be discussed.

I thought this would be a great capper to the day as this is what we’re currently studying at the UW (Saggy Middles).  It was a pretty long day with few breaks and my coffee had worn off hours before.  The time was spent reading different well written excerpts from short and longer stories from famed authors like James Joyce, Milton, and Dante… My challenge though was that we didn’t really talk or dissect why those middles were so strong.   It made me appreciate my class that much more.  We may have some wacky assignments that don’t make a lot of sense, but paired with the readings you understand as a writer that you need to make the middle strong to carry your reader to the climax.

Saturday Recap – I only attended one panel today but it was probably my favorite of the lot.  So I’m glad I hauled myself over to Seattle.

Topic: Never Grow Up: Building a Life in Children’s and Young Adult Fiction


Loved this panel.  Impressive ladies, with great stories and energy.  Most of them got their start after college (all studying English in some form it seemed, Robin was a Harvard grad…whoa) in publishing or working with publishers.  Sarah who was deeeelightful – started at Harlequin up in Canada – started writing ‘New Adult’ when there wasn’t a category like that and she and her editor/publisher/agent built a career around it.  (promptly bought a compilation of her  Magic in Manhattan book at B&N after the show).  Robin started at Scholastic editing the bottom of the barrel stuff (since she was newbie on the totem) and after doing that for a while felt she COULD absolutely do better. (want to read her stuff as well – need to check amazon).

Sarah asked a few questions and the panel each took a turn answering.  The first was how did they get their start (above), the second was whether they experienced a Sophomore Slump.

RW: After finishing her first series (7 Deadly Sins – 7 books which she really counts as one) she tried her hand at a more serious topic “Hacking Harvard”  – at the suggestion of her publisher.  She thought the idea of the book was perfect for her – but in reality it was the hardest thing she ever tried to write (I downloaded the sample).

AG: After her first book about fairytales/fables went well she started in on her second, and it fizzled for her.  She had to do some reexamining on whether or not she really was an author (and she remained an author!).  By her third book she had really done some personal digging and it shows in the writing.  It is more honest and true to her.

EL: Her first publication was a picture book that was met successfully.  Afterwards she thought she could do no wrong and went to pitch her next idea to her publisher – who promptly turned her down outright.   This lead her to do some thinking about picture books and that she really didn’t understand what they were but got v. lucky with the first one.

SM:  Her first book was quazi memoir-like and she was afraid that after writing it she had used up all of her funny jokes and wouldn’t have anything else to write about.  Her next book she took a stab at writing a book about 3 roommates, from each of their 1st person point of view (which at the time hadn’t been done before).  She found that she really had to work at making each voice sound unique and different, and in a voice that was but wasn’t hers.

Recommended to follow Holly Black (several times throughout the panel).  Recommended Gordon Korman – former child prodigy (published at age 12) prolific writer of YA/MG.  Recommended a site called Wattpad – for real feedback from readers.

Question to panel: Who do you model your career after?  (must have 10 years more experience…)

Answers weren’t so much who, but how they thought about this process and how different the answers are.  Some wanted to be superstars (a la Cassandra Clare), others wanted to have an impact (a la Robert Cormier) and still others wanted to teach and mentor and put out a title every 10 years or so.

Question to panel:  How do you handle review/reviewers?

  • EL:  Look for the trades ‘star’ or ‘no star’ and check the box.  Never reads Good Reads.  You need to be able to block out the noise and ‘keep on swimming’ (my words not hers).
  • RW: wants the ‘star’ to check the box, as the publishers will do more if you get stars.  DOES look at Goodreads (et. al) because she wants to look for themes in bad reviews.
  • SM: reads goodreads but only to improve the next version in a series, because by the time goodreads reviews come out there isn’t anything you can do about the book – it’s done and published.  you can only impact future writing.
  • All reviewers are customers/audience – tune out the idiots.

Question to Panel: When did you get an agent?

  • RW – sadly two books into a seven book series – had a horrific agent experience and was shy about getting one after, but ended up finding a great one that she’s stuck with since.
  • SM – was able to interview potentials f2f because she had a two book deal from Harlequin.
  • AG – an agent should bring something to the relationship that you don’t have (a strength that you’re missing)
  • EL – when you start earning money you should have an agent

Okay – what a fun time that was.  Next up the SCBWI conference here in Seattle.  Now back to the saggy middle for me!

Rip Van Winkle has nothing on me!

Hello Readers (aka Mom…)

When we last spoke I expressed that something in my busy fall schedule needed to give. I was working, traveling, writing, blogging, going to a writing class, taking an online anthro class, and trying to read 52 books in 52 weeks (and doing this crazy diet contest with a bunch of people, but that is another story).  I thought that I would be okay just giving up the Anthro class (was a free online course so not really a huge deal if I deferred for a bit).

I ended up being laser focused on work, travel, writing class, dieting and reading. I dropped the anthro class and the blogging, and sadly didn’t quite make 52 in 52  – though read a lot of great books last year (read 48 books I think – which is pretty good considering I started in June tracking my books!).

Now we’re in 2014 and I’ve just passed a milestone birthday (not one with a 0 at the end, but a 5, which is almost as impactful when you’re filling out surveys and the like – I’m not in a new category, blech.) and thinking I need to get BACK into the blogging aspect of the above goals.

The goals of course have been modified slightly this year – yup, I’m a resolution kind of gal (I like goals and deadlines… work better under pressure).  So here they are for all to see (and heck it’s the first day of A month, just not the month – so it’s almost like you’ve been with me the whole time).

1) Read a lot (achieve 52 in 52 this year – no excuses)

2) Keep writing (I am in class until June so that will help.  I’ve also entered a writing contest – yep. that’s write…er right, this shit just got real sort of – more on that later too) & try to keep up on this blog business, if only to work through exercises and keep track of the books I’m reading.

3) Keep on that healthy track.  The diet contest is every other month, which is GREAT during the month, but v. binge worthy when not in the contest.  More on that later

4) De-clutter – always a goal.  Mine this year was the office and closet spaces.  Paul has the kitchen and garage (God help him, we’re Hoarders contestants in there).

5) Couple other financial goals but you don’t need to know those – needless, they’re lofty but attainable with some dedication (and avoidance of  🙂

2014 Reading Challenge

2014 Reading Challenge
Kathy has
read 9 books toward her goal of 52 books.

Reading, reading and more reading…

Okay – class(es) are in full swing. I think taking the writing class and the anthro class that P wanted to take online MIGHT have been biting off more than I can chew. I LOVE LOVE LOVE the writing class. So fun and interesting and I’m really learning a lot. I fear that my interest in writing and the writing class have overshadowed the Anthro class. I’m trying to keep up – but if I don’t get my homework done with P then I fall really far behind. And – since it is a real college course, they have a lot of homework.

Sigh. I wish I had enough energy for both. It is fun taking a class with P. With NANO and launch around the corner, something will have to give.

That said – still on a reading tear. A little bit at a time, and still 5 books behind making my goal of 52 in 52.  I have a quick flight tonight to LA and then back Sunday  – on which I won’t be bringing my surface so no tv/movie distractions!  I currently have 4 books rolling.  Ender’s Game  by Orson Scott Card) – I know, I know, controversy – Orson Scott – not a nice dude.  But I can’t continue to have my scifi geek card if I don’t read this one), Dark Places by Gillian Flynn, A Memoir on Writing by Stephen King (recommended by my prof), and Strunk and White’s Element of Style (again, and this was recommended by Stephen King).   The latter 3 are all actual books, the first is on my kindle.  I’ll bring two with me on this trip so I can read during take off and landing too! 🙂  Let’s see if I can get through two in three days.

2013 Reading Challenge

2013 Reading Challenge
Kathy has
read 38 books toward her goal of 52 books.

I just finished reading my favorite book of the year – Ready Player One by Ernest Cline. He wrote a magical, nerdy, nostalgic book about a geeky gamer who is trying to find the ultimate ‘easter egg’ (gaming term for a hidden code in a video game that gives the player a prize) within a massive open world/mmo video game and win a multibillion dollar fortune. All the 80’s references were AWESOME. And gave me an opportunity to reach out to the author and asked him how he obtained permission for all of the lyrics and other references in the book. It was insane. And written in first person – very fun. I have recommended it to about 20 people as required reading if you are in the gaming industry. 🙂

So on top of all this reading (to hone my ‘craft’ don’t you know…) I also am writing for class and getting ready for NanoWriMo starting November 1st.   This week we got our first homework back – and the prof said after two additional days of lecture and learning that she wanted us all to rewrite our openings taking her feedback in mind.  PHEW.  Having read my piece out loud to P, I wanted to rewrite a bunch of things too.  So that is our homework this week.

One of the things I love about class is that we write each week.  She gives us a topic (week two – write an interview with your main character to learn more about him/her) and we write for about 20 minutes then she asks for volunteers to read out loud for critiques.   She also taught us how to properly critique constructively and positively.  This week’s writing exercise was to write about the catalyst (the point in the story where the ‘hero’ decides to go willingly or unwillingly on their ‘journey’ – think when Luke Skywalker first meets the droids and there is a message for ObiWan that needs to be delivered, then his farm and aunt/uncle are killed forcing him to go on this journey).

My story (for class anyway) has a willing hero going to college, so figuring out the catalyst has been challenging my brain a bit.  In class this week, I wrote the below dialog to help determine what my catalyst is (the protagonist wants to go to college, but does she know where she wants to live yet?  Having spent the past 8 years living on a studio lot, keeping her real identity a secret – would living amongst 50k students be a) overwhelming and/or b) ruin her cover?  Anywhoo – I didn’t have enough time to finish the thought, but I DID volunteer to read out loud in class.  My content is so simple and happy compared to the rest of the epic saga’s  I wanted to get some feedback early.  I did get some good feedback – none really negative though.  This probably means that the story is SO simple they don’t know how to actually say that.  ha!

Oh well – I’m having a good time.